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Friday, 16 July 2010
Gotham Continued

 Gotham Continued,

 

By:Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

 

Picking up his hammer and bag he kicks open the door. The Alarm sounds! He walks outside throwing the bag and hammer to the guys in the van, then walks back inside. Setting a couple more timers on the walls. To his surprise he hears something, he looks up and sees something in the shadows

of the rafters. He turns to run as the shadow disappears. While standing at the door he takes a look around. Surprisingly, he turns to his left and Batman appears from the shadows. Throwing a punch, the man grabs Batman and they tumble threw the door, falling to the street. Another m an runs from the van jumping in the brawl, as they try t out man the hero.



 

 



While the fight progresses the two men get the upper hand, the van takes off and races forward the two men then throw Batman into the on coming vehicle. He bounces off the front and on to the hard ground. Then Both men make run for it jumping inside the van, as it takes off into the night, Batman is bleeding from the mouth. He stumbles to his feet as sirens are heard ringing throughout the city. Batman sees they are out of reach, walks back up the stairs and into the Jewelry Store, breathing really hard. He stops inside the door, as the camera circles him. He looks startled, because it looks as if his Bat stars have been scattered everywhere. He turns around as two Police cars have arrived. A detective gets out barley seeing Batman from the outside, and demands he stop in place. However Batman looks back, and when the officers get inside. He is gone, but to their surprise, all the evidence points to him. Detective Ramirez, proceeds back out side, ordering the other officer to search for evidence. Ramirez goes to the car making the call for backup and demanding Lieutenant Gordon, come as soon as possible. The Other officer walks out side with a the note and trinket in hand. Then hands it to Ramirez. Ramirez then begins to read.



Ramirez: What is the circumference of a axis turning time to eyes with nothing inside?



Officers begin arriving at the crime scene, Ramirez begins turning the trinket, Gordon gets out of one of the cars approaching Ramirez.


Gordon: Hows it going Detective?



Ramirez: Fine thank you Lieutenant, when we arrived we saw the Batman inside the store, we tried to catch him but when we entered the store he had vanished then we found this trinket and note. The stores been cleaned out completely, and we have one death. There were mark found on the Night officers throat.



At this time one of the officers is shown walking through the safe rooms door. Unknowingly he trips the hidden wire, the timers red numbers are shown, 5....4....3.....2.....1..... Gordon and Ramirez are shown walking away from the police car as other officers have entered. When a explosion goes off, Gordon and Ramirez are then thrown back onto the hard pavement. Ash and rubble crashing onto the police cars, falling onto everyone.

 

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010

Posted by bowminater at 4:54 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:54 AM EDT
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Gotham

Gotham”

Written By: Dennis Shaun Bowman







Music plays lightly,while rumblings are heard in the background, as the lights cut like lasers through the darkness. As the camera begins to focus, a subway train is in clear view, two men dressed in security outfits are shown.




Scenes shift to a jeweler, packing up his brief case, & closing down the store for the night. He walks from behind the counter meeting the night shift security officer, at the door. They talk, & the Jeweler leaves, as the officer shuts the door locking it behind the man. The Jeweler puts his hat on and walks out into the snowy night. The Officer looks at his watch, then looks around the room, and starts to to walk away.



 

Two duffel bags are in the floor next to the men in security outfits feet, on the subway train. The man on the right takes off his hat, and nods his head looking forward. A man makes his way through the crowd, with a guitar case in hand. He positions himself in front the subway doors, setting the guitar case on the ground. He opens it and pulls his guitar from the case. Then begins to speak.


 

Taking requests ladies and gentlemen, is there anything you want hear??? Anyone?? Ok speak now or forever hold your piece.....”


(One of the officers speaks up.)

 

Do you know before you accuse me?”


Yes, Sir, I believe I can pick it out.”



The man begins to play as the train continues to its destination. The officer is shown back at the Jewelry store, changing the security tape. He looks into the camera sees a shadow outside one of the doors, he reaches for his gun. Goes to take a look, walking fast out of the security room. He gets to the door and peeks over his shoulder through the glass. He knows the man and puts away his gun. The officer tells him to wait, as he walks to the security key pad punching in the disablement code. The Alarm is turned off for the moment, he walks back to the door opening it for the man. He steps in from the dark wearing sunglasses, and a strange hat, toting a sledge hammer in hand, and a duffel bag over his shoulder. He sets his bag and hammer down, as the officer locks the door behind him.








The subway train is coming to a stop, the guitarist is packing up, while people throw in the last bit of change from their pockets into the open guitar case. The two Officers stand, one smirking, with the bags on their shoulders, one hands the guy some cash as he stands, the guitarist thanks everyone. Standing the two men move closer to the doors as the train nears its stop, the train reaches its destination and the doors open up. The two men are then swallowed by the crowd, as they walk towards the escalator.




Back at the Jewelry Store the officer is messing with the alarm system. The man with the hat has his back unzipped pulling out plastic coverings, he places it over his body and face. He then pulls out a cd player from the bag, he takes out a cd, turn the volume all the way up and speaks to the officer.



Do you have that alarm off, for good this time???”




The Officer is sorting through wires, making a clip then turns his head and yells, back at the man.


 

Got it!”


Man: “Good!”



The man flips the on switch blasting rock music that echos in the large store. He picks up his hammer and bag, and walk over to one very large counter. Drops the bag, and swings the hammer smashing out the glass on the sides. Then reaches for his bag, sweeping the jewels into the unzipped opening, when he does this the other man comes from behind, placing something inside the now open case. The man in the officer out fit stops reaching into his pocket and pulls out his cell phone, reading a message. He stops tapping the other man on the shoulder, the other man shakes his head and switch sides knocking the glass out of the counter on the opposite side. The officer leaves his side, pulling one of the filled bags, to the door. He looks up there is a knock at the door, its the two men from the subway train, he reaches over to the cd player, turning down the music. He looks outside startled, then yells out something at the man with the plastic on.


Hey the van isn't out front, where did you park it?”



Man: “Its parked beside the doors on the left side of the building, that are positioned closes to the alley way.... Hey get me another bag, and get them started on that safe,we need to get all we can then get out of here... FAST!'







The night officer throws the other man in the hat a bag, then shows the other two men where the safe is, one of them drops to his knees as soon as he sees it, unzips his bag pulling out ex plosives, the night officer away lugging the heavy bag. The other man stands by the safe being thrown explosives from his kneeling partner. He begins to set the explosives, in the center of the safe door.




Doors to the left of the building are shown swinging open, the night officer walks out, the van is parked in front of the two doors. He walks down the stairs with the bag, he opens the sliding van door, throws the bag inside, then when he turns is met by the man in plastic. Whos holding two bags of his own, they throw them inside. The night officer goes inside the van and throws the man three empty bags, and a explosion is heard. They take off running back inside, to the safe, throwing the other two men bags. Then begin to clean out the safe. The man with the glasses leaves the safe room, checking behind the counters, for back stock. He looks at his watch, goes over to the cd player, unplugs it. The others are toting the bags out. He tells them to leave the safe open. He reaches in his pocket and pulls timers from his pockets, then walks over to the entrance to the safe, setting the timers from one side to the other, and running a thin line of thread straight across. He then goes back to the counter placing a note, attached to some type of trinket inside the case. As he set the timers the night officer comes back in.


Man: Ok, everything is ready, im gonna shut the doors, you grab the alarm.



The night officer walks over to the alarm, and begins to arm it. The man tells the men to pull the van around. The officer tell s him its armed, the man says good, grabs the officer from behind wrapping a rope around his throat choking him until he breathes his last breath.



Man: Well.... There has to be a guard... Sorry friend, you are truly a hard worker. Couldn't had done it with out you.


He drops the body to the ground, then looks at his watch.



Man: Lets see how long this takes.

 

 Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010


Posted by bowminater at 4:37 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:55 AM EDT
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Tuesday, 29 June 2010
Batman The Escaping Crusaders

(We hear rumblings of a subway train in the background. As music  fades in playing softly. We see flashes of the subway train flicker through the Darkness. A camera then focuses on the back of the passing train. It moves inside and we see two men sitting down, watching Gotham news... We then hear the reporter giving the nights news brief.)

Reporter: More road blocks have been set up, as securtiy is on high alert while the circus is in town. (Video of the Road Blocks are shown.) The police are only taking this as a precaution giving the attacks Gotham has been known for. The most recent The Joker killings five years ago.


(The camera focuses back on the two men one with a duffle bags, we are interupted by a man who excuses his way through the crowd, carrying a guitar, the men are startled. He asks the crowd what they would like to hear for the night. Somebody speaks up and says "Eric Clapton Called I love you baby but I sure ain't gonna be your dog??? A lady speaks up and says, "Yeah BABY!" He shakes his head and begins to play for the crowd.


Guitarest: I love you baby, but sure ain't gonna be your dog!

 

People are clapping and singing. Car's are then shown getting stopped at a road block, a officer asks for the mans I.D as the car comes to a stop. The window roll's down and we see Bruce wayne.)


Officer: Need to see your I.d sir.


Wayne:You sure about that?(The Officer gives a strange look.Wayne reaches into his pocket pulling out his wallet.) Apologies for the sarcasam officer. Here. (Bruce hands it to the officer, the officer look's at it.)


Officer: Thank you Mr.Wayne... I'll be right back we have to run a test on it. Apologies Sir, just being extra precautous with what transpired five years ago with the Circus is in town.


Wayne: Of coarse. No worries officer.


(The Officer walk's away. Scenes change and a the owner of Roman Jewelers is closing up shop. Roman Sionis closes up his brief case wearing a trench coat as he head's for the door stop's giving the night gaurd his orders.)


Roman: I trust tonight should go by smoothly. Please call me if you have any problems.


Guard: Will do Sir.... Have a good night.


(Roman nod's walking out the door and into the night. Scenes shift back to the officer approaching Waynes car. Wayne look's at the officer, as he hands him back his I.D.)


Wayne: So it all checked out?


Officer: Yes sir apologies....


(Wayne, takes the I.D back.)


Wayne: it's quite alright.... I'm running late, tell the Luetenant I said hi!


(The Officer glances at Wayne. Wayne smirk's rolling up his window to the lamberquinie. The camera then shows the car speeding off into the night. Mean while back at Romans Jewelry the officer is shown in  security room, looking at the night cameras. He is then startled by his phone vibrating in his pocket. He look's at it, as he changes over night tapes, he leaves the room. Scenes change again.)


There is more in my head many ways I can write this. But One way which will work for the story. What you saw before, is how I would break Joker out. But I know a lot. Yes i'll include all the rough draft. Warner Brothers will you give ma a job, and a role in the Third Batman to get paid to collaborate with Warner Brothers the Nolans and Mr.Goyer and write the rest?

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010

Posted by bowminater at 11:22 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:55 AM EDT
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Saturday, 13 February 2010
Best Valentines Date Ever?
SOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooOOOO WhaT's  Everyones Best V-Day Date ever???

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