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Sunday, 18 July 2010
Gotham.

Gotham By Dinnis Shaun Bomwan

 

 

Writing down the location, Alfred looks at his TV. A reporter is shown, looking quite un comfortable, while talking she looks to her side, and is being held by gun point.



Reporter:Welcome! This is Vicky Val, on Gotham live...... For everybody wondering we have received word, the Batman is being apprehended as we speak....In... this(Shaking) Time of trouble we have a outstanding citizen Edward Nigma, standing up and speaking out, please watch.



Nigma: Tonight Gotham is a sad night for our fallen city, rest assured, I have apprehended the Batman. (Gotham police are shown inside of their cell, Gordon walk's forward putting his hands on the cell bars watching the Tv.) It's rather Unfortunate I am sad to report the chase did not end good, and he's dead. (Gordon is shown falling to his knees, and officers crying tears of saddness. Alfred is looking at the tracking device, talk's to himself.)



Alfred: How did he?




Nigma: Rest assured Gotham, we are on this. I am sad to inform Gotham city that the same men you called police may have also been working with the vigilante, friends I urge a great deal of gratitude and favor to this man. (Holds up a picture of Riddler.) He is known as Riddler. He has stood up, and brought down this once celebrated hero. (Gordan looks in shock.)



Gordon:He's framing us.



Nigma: Riddler has sent me a message as read, “Call a call, call my name, the man who hunt's finds no gain. Quote. I'm a savior, protector Gothams help, through the bitter flames, I will gain your respect, who am I to you? “ Followed by a big question mark. (Riddler holds up the card so everybody watching can see it. Alfred is shown getting in a car and pulling out of Wayne manor.) In this time I would like to also extend my hand to my fellow counter part, and competitor, Mr.Bruce Wayne. Mr.Wayne if you are watching, we need to talk, we both must stand, to make sure this chaos stops. Please also everybody I urge you to stay in, I personally want you to know, Joker has been granted permission to leave Arkham. He is working with us, since he has been declared innocent. In belief his once believed crimes were just, in stopping these mad men. Lieutenant Jim Gordon, Mayor Garcia, Officer Ramirez, and others have been apprehended and brought into questioning, please I'm working close to governor representatives to bring in their officers, agents. As we restore leadership, right now I have been ordained to act as the currant Mayor. So please with lots of love, I bid you all farwelll and goodnight.


(Joker is sitting in a chair watching Harley at his side, we then see a fire crew at the scene of where the Bat car went over the edge. A camera focuses inside to Alfreds back he looks at his GPS, then is stunned by the flames. Alfred parks the car, Shuts the door tries to run looking over the edge and is stopped by officers.)

 

(ThE EnD)

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010


Posted by bowminater at 11:33 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:44 AM EDT
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Gotham

Gotham By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

 

Harley takes her pointy heel and kicks him in his bloody side. Joker look's a amusing look at her. He put's his arm around her, and they kiss. Batman is shown driving on the road, which is positioned high above sea level. A veiw of water crashing into rocks is shown. Batman is in the Bat car, traveling fastly, he begins to close his eyes....Shakes his head, he takes out his cell phone a dials Alfred at Wayne Manor.



Alfred:Bruce! Are you ok? I saw the news.....Havent heard from you.... What happened???




Batman:I'm almost dead.....Ive been shot in the shoulder and side, Im losing blood right now! Think im about to wrek!




Alfred: Where are you?




Batman: I'm (shaking head) I'm close......




The car is shown drifting back and forth on the road. The Car then slowly drifts off into some trees, a view of the car is shown driving off the cliff and slamming into a rock! The car is ingulfed in flames, Alfred is shown yelling into the phone reciever!




Alfred: Bruce! Bruce! BRUCEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!




Alfred, hangs up then runs into the computer room..... Looking at the rader tracker, he sees a blinking light. It blinks a couple of times. Then fades away. He puts his thumb on the location, then start's to figure out how far from Wayne Manor is from the actual pin point target is located.

 

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010 

 


Posted by bowminater at 10:44 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:45 AM EDT
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Gotham

Gotham By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

 

Batman lunges at him, and Tetch shoots him in the side. Batman stumbles back words, kneeling on the ground. Tetch circles him, and takes off running, back across the Catwalk. Batman get's up staggering in chase. Tetch runs back down the stairs to the Ally way, Batman follows, Security is alerted. Batman sees them moving on the ground. He stops climbs to the very top of the building in front of the Gothams factory sign. He then jumps off, his Body is shown ripping through the air, falling onto one of the deliver trucks parked in front. He slides off the truck limping and running, he manages to make it through the gate, as security run's out shooting, Batman walk's towards the street, he sees his car, hidden in trees. He hurries, being chased, jumps in and as he drives off, gun shot's are being fired at the car. Some vehicles are shown leaving the Factory, and a chase begin's Batman being wounded heavily, is bleeding from the side, and the shoulder has a bullet stuck inside from the skuffle at the Prison. He turns on the car,with the lights turned off, he manages to escape unseen. But one car spot's him. The passenger shoots a the window at the sleek, granite colored skyline shot's rickshey off the car. Men look around at the factory see something, in the distance. Shot's still being fired.The car get's closer as Batman turns into some run down apartments ally way. Then back out onto the main road, where they head over a bridge. The car gains closer and closer, hitting Batman. Batman run's the car into the cars side forcing it of the side. The car crashes through the brick wall, landing into the icy water below. He drives towards the mountian's, right beside a beautiful coastline. Batman's car is shown riding into the night. Meanwhile Riddler is shown arriving at the food factory, he's walking up the Aisle, he stops at lances office and opens the door. lance looks up a little bloodied and bruised.



lance:Riddler?




Riddler: The one and only....Ew... nasty! Took a beating.




lance:Just a little bit, is this covered under workmans cop?




Riddler:Not hardly!




lance:You should be proud of your Boy over there.... Got a shot on the Batman....




Riddler:Should I?




lance:No really took my thirty eight got him really good.




Riddler:Is that so Brucey! How devine!




Tetch:Yeah....Really....




Riddler:Really????



Tetch:It really felt good!



Riddler smirks, then turns and looks at lance, Joker is shown at the police department, siiting beside Quinn, with his foot propped up on the bleeding Ramirez. Ramirez coughing through his injuries, manages to talk.



Ramirez:Quinn.....you shot me what's wrong with you...Quinn... Do you hear me?




Quinn: Who's he talking about?




Joker: Just a dumb ass look for attention! Go sweety introduce yourself!




Ramirez:What?




Quinn: Hi J! Imma Harley!




Ramirez:What the Hell?

 


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Gotham

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Alfred: Hey man.... You have to get out of there.....We have a problem....



Batman:Yeah it's coming from here.....



Alfred:Maybe...But this is bigger....... It' seems every cop has been attained there are some on the street.... But not only is the Mayor missing... But this isnt Good!



Batman:What? Cop's apprehended??? What are you talking about???



Alfred:Exactly! You need to get here fast!


 


As Batman is talking he turns and is met by a pip to the side of his head it's Tetch! Batman fall's back, Tetch hit s him again then takes off running through the food factory.



Batman:STOP KID! STOP! You have no idea what you are doing!



Tetch:(Yelling, looking back) GET AWAY FROM ME!



A chase ensues.......Tetch makes it inside lance's office, he ducks behind the desk. Opens one of the droors, and finds a little 38 pistol. He reaches for it and checks the chamber. It appears to be loaded. He heres the door creek open, look's at the feet. He thinks it's Batman, then notices the shoes are differant, he put the gun in his pocket then rises to his feet. It's lance.



lance:Hey what the hell are you doing man?



Tetch:We have a visitor.....It's the Batman.



lance:I see....



Tetch:Yeah he chased me, I ducked in here and thought you were him.



lance:Alright, I'll alert security.




lance pick's up the phone and makes a call... Tetch begins to step out... lance covers the mouth piece on the phone.



lance:Tetch dont leave without me!



Tetch:Im ok....It's ok I swear.....Time for me to get off anyway!



lance, call's security, he talk's a few minutes then hangs up. He walk's towards Tetch and they make thier way down the aisle. They head towards, the exit. Then theywalk's out into the night. Tetch see's something in the ally way moving in the shadow's he runs towards it. As he get's closer lance is yelling at him, chasing behind. Tetch stop's look's around nothing is there, lance walk's up standing by his side. Looking around lance turn's, and Batman meet's his face with a fist. lance trys to fight, and Batman knock's him out cold. Tetch takes off running down the ally way. He sees a ladder hanging down, and climb's it, Batman is chasing. Tetch begins running up stairs, Batman in hot persuit, yelling at the kid, stop. Tetch makes it to the roof top and runs across the catwalk to the other building. Batman still chasing. Tetch comes to a door that will not open, which leads back in side. Batman walk's up from behind. Tetch put's his hand in his pocket.



Batman:Why are you doing this? Everyone know's they tried to set you up...You have no reason to be running....



Tetch:Wee.... Wee...



Batman:Excuse me?



Tetch: Je ne sais pas???



Tetch pull's out the thirty eight.



Batman:No! NO! KID DONT!


Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010


Posted by bowminater at 10:34 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:58 AM EDT
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Gotham

 

 Gotham By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

Batman is shown hoping a fence, and ducking past security as he enters Gothams Food Factory. He avoids security and peaks inside the window's watching the inside progress. What he see's is men at work. He duck's down as one of the doors open. Two men walk outside. As they walk away Batman grabs the swinging door. Then walk's inside out of site from the workers. As he works his way through the factory he notices several people leaving the nurse office. He waits for the men to be totally out of site. He looks around the door facing and sees the nurse with her back turned all alone. He walk's inside, closing the door behind him. She turn's around and is met by Batman. She moves fastly as if shes going for a button. But he restrains her, and forces her into a chair. He then begin's to talk to her.



Batman: Whats in the needles?



Nurse:It's for saftey precautions, I dont know, I'm just pad to inject!



Batman: Who's paying you?



Nurse:Why the Owner of nigma of coarse....That's all I know!



Batman picks up one of the needles as she stand up to run, he then injects her with it. She stumbles back falling into the chair. Batman begins to speak to the nurse who clutching her arm in pain.


Nurse: You ASSHOLE! That hurt..... They are going to find out you were here...cause....cause...


 

Batman notices her becoming faint. She slures her words.


Batman:Look's like theres more in this little needle than just to fit medical precautions. How do you feel?



Nurse:Hungry.....



Batman:Hungry?



Nurse: Yes...Very! Im' going to go find something to eat...



Batman:But you were just in pain.....



Nurse:I was.... By the way, what's with the outfit? New Scrubs?



Batman look's stuned he turns and fastly run's out of the room! He ducks behind some Boxes and see Tetch and lance walking into lances office. Joker Riddler and Quinn are shown with men escorting Gordon, and other officer's into the holding cell, at the police department. One by one they enter......


Joker:What a scenic veiw!



Ramirez:So your just going to leave Gordon bleeding to death Harley....



Quinn: Who?



Ramirez Where is the Mayor....Or did you murder him too?



Riddler:Where to Why To You To Is To Now.....?? It's a Surprise Chiefy! Let me put it like this, he's running deeply.



Gordon shakes his head. Batman is spying on lance, and Tetch. Tetch is shown leaveing lance headed for his work station. lance goes back into his office. Batman then get's up and proceeds quitley after Tetch. Tetch is shown mending his work area. Batman ducks behind some Brucexes. What he sees is a processing machine. Tetch seems to be packaging food and placing it onto the rack to his right. Batman hears a noise, and it's his phone. He then answers the incoming call, it's Alfred. Tetch look's up, and around. Batman answers.



Batman:Hello?

 

 Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010


Posted by bowminater at 10:22 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 8:59 AM EDT
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Gotham
By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

 

Gordon:Yeah im' limited on men.... actually....... So I dont know if I can help you....




Gordon is shown talking out back.... Joker walk's up behind him pokes a gun into his back, and Joker

whispers in Gordons ear....



Joker: Well.... I just cant get enough of you! Tell your Boyfriend you have to go!



Gordon: I have to go....



Batman: ok????



The phone is hung up, Batman is left speechless.......Listening to the dead phone.... He muffles some words to himself....



Batman:Gotham food...Gotham food!



Batman climbs to his feet. The scenes shift back to the Police department. Joker is walking back inside with Gordon and hostages... Some of the men are startled, that have not been poisined, and reach for they're guns. Joker stop's them.



Joker: I wouldn't do that!



Ramirez: Why????



Joker:Because your already outnumbered!


 

Some men then enter one by one with gun's pointing them at the officers. Quinn enter's make up smeared, runny. She has a gun and points it directly, at Ramirez.



Ramirez: What Hell, Quinn?



Quinn: If you cant beat em join them!



She pulls back the trigger and shoot's Ramirez in the arm. He Fall's Gordon hollars out "NO!"



Riddler: It didnt have to be like this you know??? Anyway..... Officers. gun's please. I want them in a pile in the middle of the floor. Disobey and join your friends!


Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010

Posted by bowminater at 10:09 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 9:00 AM EDT
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Gotham

 

 Gotham: By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

Gordon:Wow!



(Walking inside the Gordon notices two officers sitting down, he walk's by, as they hold coffee cups and stair strangely into space.)




Ramirez: Yeah look at the news.




(They turn their attention to the TV.)



Reporter:Nigma Enterprise has announced it has closed out it's final, deal.



Gordon:Are you kidding me?



Ramirez: That's only the tip of the Ice Berg, I had to get men to the Museum, there was another explosion, found more Batman memorabilia,

 


Nigma: Gotham has been a struggle for me, I remember starting on the streets, and working my way up to this. It's a honor to stand before you today, and announce my purchasing of another Nigma enterprise, I' am very pleased. This day has been a long time coming, and I hope it's the beginning of more to come!




Press:Mr.Nigma...Edward!!!Comment.



Press member: What are your thought's on the latest crimes?



Nigma: It's very shocking, I find it appalling and I am quite shocked! To find out that The Batman has been raging these horrendous cries on our city. I'm tightening down on security, to make sure our food, and grooming product aren't harmed. Our security will be on HIGH alert, the Vigilante known as Batman, will be ordered to be shot dead on sight! That's all please excuse me, and thank you for your time.





(Chatters are heard by the press tying to get more comment.)





Gordon: I don't like this....




Ramirez:Nigma?



Gordon: I don't trust him.



Reporter:In other news. Strange event's are ac curing all over the city, the patient rate has went up and Police are bamboozled as to what is causing all these strange event's. They are advising the city be on lock down and nobody go outside! I repeat NOBODY LEAVE YOUR HOUSE!





He's looking around.....Back At the Police men, by the door and others who are being attended to medically. Who are being attended to Medically.





Ramirez: Yes....No tests have came back.... I dont know what to think....


 


Gordon is shown looking around......He notices the empty food containers by one of the officers being examined.....Ramirez begins to talk.....





Ramirez: I'm going to get some Coffee.....Would you like any?



(Gordon look's back at the officers holding the coffee cups, Ramirez has pored her cup and about to take a drink.)





Gordon:No dont! I want all of the men out on the field dispatched! Tell them not to eat or drink a thing!



Ramirez: Ok.....



Gordon:Same for you!(Gordon yelling at everyone) NO ONE EAT OR DRINK ANYTHING! THATS A ORDER! If you dis obey.......You can call it a day!



The Two men are shown inside the Hanger, they turn around, and are met by Batman. Then a brawl begins, Between the men. Batman is shown winning the fight. As Batman gains the upper hand he turns noticing the Air plan leaving.....He turns to one of the men on the ground....



Batman:Where is your shipment order????



The man spit's in his face, Batman punches him in the stomach.



Batman: I'll make you talk!



Tetch and Just are shown closing the trailer door, they walk around and enter the truck. They begin to leave, Batman look's up and see the truck pulling out.... He then grab's the man on the ground. Scenes change, Gordon is shown talking to Ramirez......



Ramirez: This isn't good.....



Gordon: I know, im going out back for a smoke.....



Gordon begins to walk, and his phone rings...... It's Batman.


Batman: I have one of his men, I acquired shipping information. Apparently......These shipment's have been going in and out, from the USA to Europe, and Asia!



Gordon: What???



Batman: Yeah it's weird! But heres what's really interesting...... It's big cargo! I tried looking on one of the planes.... But I was too late, to check anything.....However..... there another scheduled..... Ive got the two men apprehended. They are tied together inside hanger 7.



Gordon:Got it....



Batman: Yeah the next shipment is set to go out mid afternoon..... I found the crate's took a look inside. I suggest you come down here, and get on this. Send men..... We can get these guys!



Gordon shakes his head....



Gordon: Hanger 7 ok, there's something else apparantley someone has got into our food supply.... It's bad....




Batman:What?


Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010



Posted by bowminater at 9:57 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 9:01 AM EDT
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Gotham

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(The voice hang's up, and we hear the dial tone, Gordon yells “EXCUSE ME?” Into the phone, A fire truck then drives in front of his car, he veers off the road and onto the sidewalk hitting a hydrant. Water spews! Gordon Get's out staring at his phone.Joker is shown sitting in a room, at the Bookstore store across from Quinn, who appears dist route.



Joker:You have the loveliest eyes.



Quinn: Your sick.....



Joker:Yeah.....Are you hungry? How about some food?



Quinn: No I feel sick.....



Joker pull's out his gun pull's back the Hammer and shoot's the wall....Then point's it at her.




Joker: How about some food?




Quinn: I dont think you'll do it....



Joker: You don't......(Joker get's closer to her putting his hand on her shoulder.) Maybe you need some convincing. I guess our little meeting in that car wasn't enough. Just waiting for the call, and the right time. You know there is a right time for things. It's all about time. (He bends closer to her ear.) Like now..... Thisssssssss..... could b...(His phone buzzes. He glances at the text.) AHHHHH!(Frustrated) And we were just getting started! (He reads, Move.)You know.... When we have more time... I'll show you why I wear the make up. You know before we cut this short, you look awfully pale. I think you need a make over, maybe a little make up.Here drink this!




Scenes change to the men finishing their loading of good's onto one of the planes, a Wood's food truck is shown pulling into the Air Port gate. Batman is perched on the terminals roof top, with goggles watching everything..... He notices Tetch and lance exiting their work truck, Tetch is shown walk exiting the truck, and opening the trailer door. Batman then look's back at the men walking into the hanger. Scenes then change to Gordon arriving at the Police station. He's shown getting out of a taxi and meeting with Ramirez at the steps.

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010 


Posted by bowminater at 12:41 PM EDT
Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 9:02 AM EDT
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Disregarding the last scene My Gotham continues.

 

 Gotham By Dennis Shaun Bowman

 

Scenes then shift to, Tetch getting out of the work tuck back at Gothams factory. lance is waiting for him, as Tetch walk's up to the loading dock.



Lance: Not a bad route......



Tetch: No, no complaints.



lance:Well come inside, let's get your hours logged in, and you can call it a day.....Then go get some rest, I mean you know.... It's almost eight O clock....


Tetch: Yeah....I forget time, it's such a waste....



lance:Ha! I agree.....But that is changing, here, come in side....



lance stops as they walk through the door, when inturaupted by the dock manager.



lance:Yeah?



Man: Hey, one of the shippment's didnt go to the air port.....



lance:Ok....



Man: It's one of the big ones....



lance:Ah.....Tetch, would you be so kind to assist me on this????



Tetch:Why not?



lance Great.....has the trailer been loaded?



Man:Yes, it's all ready, just needs to be took.....



lance:Ok(Sigh) Common Tetch......



 

lance is seen walking over to one of the desk grabbing the paper work. The Man walk's off. Then he and Tetch are shown walking out of the door together. Batman is shown Sitting on top of a hanger. Scenes flash again and we see Gordon Driving in his police car, Scenes change again in this series of events, and a Explosion goes off! It's the Museum! Gordons phone rings.....



Gordon:Hello?




Voice: Light's are in the skies, and essence its what spins wheel, how far will skies fall, if decided on a kneel?

 

Copyright Dennis Shaun Bowman 2010 


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Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 9:03 AM EDT
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This portion is what if Gotham compliments from Dc comics the Killing joke style.

 This piece is By Shaun Bowman, Dc Comics, WB Pictures, Chris Nolan, andThe Dark Knight.

 


Gordon:Ok, i'll be sending men down.....Wow! Ok, I cant worry about him.... Barbara, I have to go.....




Barbara: No! Wait......You need your rest....




Gordon: Yeah but that maniac is back on the loose there is another maniac...... I have to find out what's going on.... Besides I'll let the kids do that. They rest enough for the both of us.



(Gordon look's at her kissing her, he get's up going for his coat, and his gun. She arises, helping him, Jim enters their childrens room. Kneeling by his boys. Bed and kissing his kids. Then Meeting Barbara. She walk's him to the door giving him a kiss,

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comic dialog: she open's it, then is met by a GUN SHOT! Right in the stomach. Joker is seen standing in the doorway. Mine and yours, Dark Knight: Gordon screams Catching his wife.)



Comic dialog Gordon: BARB! Mine dialog: You SON OF A BITCH! (Gordon get's up Joker cocks the trigger pointing it at him.)



Joker: Shall I go introduce myself to your kids? Please don't worry it's a psychological complaint common amongst most ex librarians. You see She thinks she's a coffee table edition! Mind you I can't say much for the volumes condition. I mean, theres a hole in the jacket and the spine appears damaged.



Comic dialog. Gordon: You scum, you scum, you killed my daughter, I'll...


My insert Gordon: I'll kill you! I swear I'll kill you Joker! If my wif...


Compliments from the killing Joke, and Dark Knight.(Gordon is met by a thrust to the stomach By a goon with a clown mask.)


Joker:Frankly she want be walking off the shelves in that state of repair. In fact the idea of her walking anywhere seems increasingly remote. But then, that's always a problem with soft backs. God these literary discussions are so dry. When your finished with the old boy, you know where to take him. And please do be careful after all this he'll be topping the bill. You know it's such a shame you'll be missing your fathers debut Miss Gordon.(Since shes his wife we'll have to insert husband instead of wife.) Sadly our venue wasn't built with the disabled in mind, but don't worry I'll take some snap shots to remind him of you.


(Joker ducks down closer. She murmurs.)


Barbara:Wuh....Wuh.....Why are you..... Doing this?(Joker starts un buttoning her top.Has drink in comic, I say scratch that, have him hold a camera, and take pictures of her while talking.)


Joker:To prove a point. (We see a flash) Heres to crime!



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Updated: Monday, 19 July 2010 9:59 AM EDT
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